Persuasive writing

Todays task was to write a pragraph starting an opinon witha reason to the following. Children should attened a longer school day. I agree because the parents might finish at 5o clock and there is 2 hours spear and could be learning more of what they want to do like sports and the paerents wont have to sourt out anyone to take care of the kids. I dissagree because the school might have not told any parents and then they would be waiting at the bustop consered when they would come home.