Persuasive Text.

For the past few days one of my classes writing task was to write a persuasive text of kids should or not get more responsibillities. The tools that I used was a paragraph that my teacher wrote on the whitebord. I found this queit difficulet because I had to go back and make more inprovements. My goal for writeing is to know who my audience is and to write for the audience.

3 way conference.

I chose this work because I have added high level detail and descriptive juicy words to make an amazing story. The tools that I used was cards that would be on it like a topic. My next step is to know who my audience is and to write for them.

Glossy waves crashing down on the crunchy golden sand, wind whooshing the crystal clear water on the solid unbreakable rocks while the horizon shone on the tropical water flowing through my hands.

3 way conference

 I'm proud of this piece of work because at the start of the year I was not really into working with much people. But then a gave it a go and I found out it is not that bad so my work that I am showing is work that I worked collaboratively on with my maths group. I found that working with others I can learn off them and we can together to solve the problem. This work is a graph my problem solving group made we are working on statistics and collecting data. 

Cause and effect

This week our topic for reading was pests. So one of my tasks was to make a poster of cause and effect if you are not really sure here is a example: cause was possums eating leaves effect: kills trees. I found this challage a bit easy because I used the people who I knew were exprets and my exaple that my teacher wrote on the whitebord. My goal is to add high level detail.

Persuasive writing

Todays task was to write a pragraph starting an opinon witha reason to the following. Children should attened a longer school day. I agree because the parents might finish at 5o clock and there is 2 hours spear and could be learning more of what they want to do like sports and the paerents wont have to sourt out anyone to take care of the kids. I dissagree because the school might have not told any parents and then they would be waiting at the bustop consered when they would come home.