Show don't tell.

Last term me and my class in writing were learning about show don't tell. Show not tell writing is using descriptive words to give the reader a picture in their heads. Instead of writing I smell, I hear and I see. Here is a piece of my writing. I found this very fun! because I love writing. This was challenging by me finding juicy words.

Isolated amongst vibrant fields of flourishing crops, sensing luscious flowers while gazing at the unforgettable wild life meanwhile an peaceful sunset shone.